One moment it was a golden statue, shining in the sun. The second I turned away from the sun, it changed. A hand with the same face as the statue appeared; the statue must be a shape-shifter. It must have been alive. I froze. Was he watching me? Nervously, I crept away. Away from the hand and the building it stood upon. A bony finger touched my back. Startled, alarmed, petrified, I turned around in fear. There it was. The hand was there. Or was it? Hallucinations filled my mind with trepidation. Everything around me had disappeared into thin air.
Love your use of 3 ed openers and vocabulary choices here Lewis
Hi Lewis
What a well written piece this week. I loved your use of short sentences as they really helped to create that sense of tension throughout. You also make some super word choices, I particularly like the use of the word ‘trepidation’.
Super writing this week, I’m glad I had the chance to read it.
Miss T Team 100wc
Hampshire, England
https://redbridgewriting.wordpress.com/
Well done on your entry this week Lewis. You’ve done a great job with a difficult prompt. I think you’ve used some excellent vocabulary and built up tension in your story.
Keep up the great writing.
Ms Brennock
Team 100 w/c
Dublin