This weekend I was excited we were going to Malibu for a weekend break!! During the car trip I drove past a scientist lab and was almost a guinea pig in his test . When we arrived I was hungry and asked my mum if we could have a pizza but she said ” Pizza isn’t healthy so we are going to subway ” she exclaimed “and if you eat it you can have a little toy . 4 hours later we had eaten our subway and it turns out the toy was a pet dog who the next day grew and chased me down Malibu Beach!
Well done for trying inverted commas within your writing.