We were moving very fast when this happened…
I was in a car race with my best friend; we were in first place but we made a mistake.
We turned around looking at the other racers- not looking at the wall we were about to hit but when we did – it was to late.
(slow-motion)
heading for the wall our faces turned blanc we thought that was the end.. But right before we hit the wall the car froze, moved back; landed softly on the floor. I don`t know how we did it but we won the race; I'm grateful.
I like your … and also your build up of tension Alycia.