Silently, Jack crept through the kitchen door ; he glimpsed the shiny, golden egg in the Giant’s secret cupboard. Quickly, Jack slipped the precious, valuable egg into his pocket. Jack tried to make his escape but, with a loud clatter, he tripped over the Giant’s boxer dog’s bone! The sleeping dog opened one eye ; he spied Jack heading towards the door. Immediately, the snarling , fuming dog barked loudly ; alerting the dozing giant. Hastily, Jack made his escape and ran quickly down the beach to the beanstalk with the monstrous dog hot-on-his-heels. Will the mischievous Jack escape with the prized golden egg ? …
I love the pace that you have created here Daniel. It put me on edge. Well done!