Once upon a time there was a clock called tic toc but his friends called him tic toc the clock. Tic toc’s favourite colour was red because his cars chasse was a crimson red. One day though when he went to work he saw outside a snake called Nagini appeared (the snake usually cycles to tic tocs house.) That morning tic toc had to be extra careful getting into his car and before the little clock drove his car to work he checked to see where his hands where so he was at work on time and he and the snake lived happy ever after
I like your use of brackets. Keep entering well done for not stopping even though you won week one!