Once upon a time in money land there was a boy called Jeff Fisher and his dad Martin Fisher owned a Lamborghini one day his way to school they were moving very fast when BANG! SCRECH! KABOOM! we had hit a bus…
Three weeks later.
He woke up with a startle this morning even though he crashed three weeks ago he could still remember it like it was yesterday. Apparently it happened ; the brakes failed and we collided with a bus! When he arrived at the hospital the doctor said we were extremely luck to even be alive and luckily no one was hurt.
The end…..
I like your opener ‘We woke up with a startle.