Malfoy was on his way home from school has to walk past Mr Snaps house he least favourite teacher ( yes Snap not Snape from Harry potter ) who had a ginormous boxer dog called Harry who hated Malfoy for no reason at all he just hates him like a dog hates a cat. One day though it was raining very heavily and when Malfoy walked past Snaps house he slipped on to the garden so Harry the boxer dog ran up to Malfoy then Malfoy thought he would be killed but turns out this New York giant was just a friendly dog who wanted to say hello.
I like the theme Ryan, however you need to proof read.